My doom comic

[william]

hi.I have made a doom comic showing the marines journey through the hanger.I plan to do more on the other levels,but here is the first issue:

http://i19.tinypic.com/4dybbyv.jpg

[FATAL]

To be frank, I don't see any point in this. Adding a few lines of text to some doom screenshots isn't really worth it.

[Dutch Devil]

You should let those doom monsters say stuff as well otherwise the doom marine is just talking to himself, oh btw screen is too big read the rules pls.

[william]

y must everyone critisize?

[rustyslacker]

Because it's really not that exciting or interesting. *shrug*

[DJShrimpy]

HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA

wait... I don't get it.

[Pieter Enis]

Spelling is another issue, if you´re serious about this, at least mind the spelling

[doomjedi]

Quite boring and pointless. ....bunch off repeating "what's wrong with that guys" lines....is doomguy that much of a moron? Yes, it's something wrong with those guys - they want to kill you :)
I can quote you some preview of the lines in the next issue :)
"What's wrong with this CyberDemon?"
"What's wrong with this Spectre?"
"Nice view"
"Nice torch" :)

[jetflock]

i want to see more dialogue as well. it seems very japanese....do you like anime as well?
i want to see more imps.

[Illdo]

Remove the white border, it looks like crud.
At the moment it's nothing but Doom screenshots with boring comments added.
Do you intend for this to be a serious comic? Anyway, it's not at all exciting.

[Ninja_of_DooM]

http://www.doomworld.com/10years/doomcomic/page00.jpg (http://www.doomworld.com/10years/doomcomic/comic.php?page=1)
The rest just don't stand up to it. :D
I'd also grab this (http://home.comcast.net/~grandline/dcdr.zip).

[william]

sorry guys but i thought it would be cool if i made a comic bout it

if i remake it what should i put in it?

[LordRaven]

Proper, readable format
Actual text boxes
Content...

Sorry to sound harsh