February 13th, 2007, 03:52 PM
Hey! Just wanted to share some of my newer music, hopefully get some feedback / constructive criticism.
Without You (download (http://www.madeofpeople.com/demo/mop_demo_heart_in_the_head.mp3))
Heart in the Head (download (http://www.madeofpeople.com/demo/mop_demo_heart_in_the_head.mp3))
Like All (download (http://www.madeofpeople.com/demo/mop_demo_like_all.mp3))
February 13th, 2007, 04:36 PM
You accidentally gave the wrong link for Without You (but it was easy to find via inputting the url manually). Again, this isn't really the type of music that I listen to, but I can certainly try to give an unbiased opinion.
First off, the bass drum is a little overpowering, especially in "Like All". Sounds a ton better than last time, as you can actually hear it this time, but yeah--it's a little overpowering. With my subwoofer it has a pretty sustained boom, instead of more of a "bump" that I think would fit better with the music.
"Without You" is nice. I noticed a bit of a off-beat either on the drum's part, or on the guitar part near the end (about 3:45 or so). Sounds like the guitar, going back. It starts going a little too fast for the drum beat.
No problems with "Heart in the Head", from what I can hear.
And "Like All" is pleasant as well, however when the distorted guitar kicks in, it sounds either out of tune, or you are using a tuning way too low for your style and it just doesn't sound right.
Overall not bad. From the first MoP songs you brought to us, you guys have evolved quite a bit. My only problem otherwise is that the music is a little repetative, and there isn't much variation in your style; all the songs sound a little too similar.
Wouldn't buy an album, but wouldn't shut it off if I heard it on the radio. ;)
February 15th, 2007, 04:07 PM
I really like "Heart In The Head". Your singer's voice has improved significantly, and the drums are pretty good too. The guitar work is still solid. :)
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