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DeathAngelicX
August 24th, 2006, 03:04 AM
Now more novels start from great games like doom3 and end up as a game them self
my understanding is Im bored as hell I got a craplode of time So I might as well write a game story line.. :P Well here goes nothing..*book*


Desolation

Chapter 1
Basic Training
Its my first day in basic Im not to thrilled about it since IsoCorp started Conscripting people into they're "Alliance", I wanted no part but it was this or be excuted for treason againt the alliance well so far I met a couple guys one that goes by the nickname "Tiny" which I thought was funney since the guy was as big as a house. A seven foot eight Giant with bicepse as big around as watermelons and the other went by the name "Steeleye" for the fact he was able to shoot a coin off a beer can from two hundred yards with no sights useing a basic pistol. At first I thought I should just stick to myself but mabye hanging out with these guys wasnt going to be so bad since the other men where looking like they wanted to beat the hell outta me. And So finaly day 1 my training begins..

DeathAngelicX
August 24th, 2006, 03:34 AM
Chapter 2
Basic Training Day 1
What did I tell you boy did I tell you to shoot yet?! Sir no sir It.. It was coming at me! This is live fire son If I tell you to shoot you shoot If I tell you to hold position and get slaughtered then you Hold position and get Slaughtered! Do I make myself clear! yes sir.. I cant hear you momma's boy! Sir Yes Sir! That better.. Now because you decided to have disobey orders I want all you Grunts to run another fifty around the track then hit the showers! As I heard this I knew for sure I was in for a beating after we ran. Later in the Showers.. As I washed myself I felt I was being watched and suddenly was struck in my lower ribs knocking the air out of me and as I hit the hard floor felt boots pounding away into my back and stomping down on my head. And like a angel of Mercy I hear Tiny's Booming voice tell the men to stand down they looked over at him and all stopped except one who supprizingly didnt hear Tiny's Voice over the men yelling and shouting. As I was still being kicked I hear the sound of Tiny's massive boots on the floor then the sound of a body hitting the floor I look over and to my amazement the one who didnt stop was now on the floor unconicous with a gash on his head from Tiny slamming him to the ground. As all the men slowly walked off Tiny Slowly helped me back up and tended to my broken ribs and cuts from them beating me. You ok kid? Yea..
Looks like they messed you up pretty bad.. Well it looks like the whole Company hates me already. You just got to Learn how to defend yourself better kid.. If you want I'll teach you how to defend yourself but you got to learn how to follow orders and dont think just do whats your told. I thought That was easy for him to say he didnt have almost everyone wanting to kill him..As I headed to my bunk I still felt the harsh pains in my sides from my broken ribs and couldnt hardly sleep..