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ReX
July 11th, 2006, 10:24 AM
"Red eyes gleamed with hatred from the depths of the dark recesses that made up the eye sockets in their skull-like heads. Horns curved obscenely from their crests, and they walked upon hoofed legs; their skin was the color of burnished leather, their chests and arms hugely muscled. They stepped down towards me, and I stood frozen in my tracks, like a mouse at the approach of the viper..."
My newest "work" of fiction, at DooM Nexus (http://doomnexus.drdteam.org).
Muscle Chris
July 27th, 2006, 04:46 PM
yo, just read it, you're a really good writer and ahve a good imagination to dig all that detail out of that map. i think you coulda done a way better doom book series
ReX
July 28th, 2006, 06:31 AM
.... and ahve a good imagination to dig all that detail out of that map....
You have no idea how difficult it was, considering that all the map consisted of was 4 main areas. Thanks for the feedback.
Muscle Chris
July 29th, 2006, 12:16 AM
yea i was thinking, o this is gonna be a short little thing i'll have a peek, and bam its like chapter length. i'll look at the other soon
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