A lovely song I wrote.

[Harry]

Are you allowed songs in artwork section? I couldn't think of what to write my song on for music, so I chose someone I know to write it on:)

Railroad blues song

Intro
Chu Chu Chu

Verse 1
You tell your useless stories
That you claim are not fiction
You have been in a hover craft
In your dads pen factories

Chorus
You know you’re such an idiot
Why can’t you get a life?
You can run 30 miles an hour
You have a laser penknife

Verse 2
You are oblivious to the fact
That you are copying my work
Go and get your own brain
And clear up your act

Chorus

Bridge
Will you bug me through college?

Middle 8

Verse 3
Oh yes I really believe you
You’re full of crap
Don’t worry I’ll smile anyway
Because a flying pig has come into view

Chorus

Small solo

Outro
Chu Chu Chu


Enjoy

[FreeLanZer]

Hahaha.. This is great.. :D
Verse 3 Owns.. :)

[FATAL]

It has strange rhymes.

[lucius octavion]

Record yourself singing it, please?

[Harry]

It has strange rhymes.

Yeah it kinda does, but I'll see how well it goes with the music I'm going to make*book*

[MR_ROCKET]

Seems like it could be a sorta dark ballet without hearing a light string riff or keys. at the end it could kick into some real heavy stuff repeating the bridge a few times maybe.
yeah its seems hard to vision the sound of it. I mean its endless what you could do with a page of lyrics heh.
Could be one of those talk sing intro's maybe.

[FATAL]

Hehe, yeah, this song could be 30 minutes long.

[Harry]

I'm going to have a band practice tomorrow, and the other members want to help me with making the tune for it :D

[Harry]

Ok I've upadated the song, because I had a band practice earlier today and we have been quite succesful with making music for it.

Here is the updated song:
Railroad blues song

Intro
Chu Chu Chu

Intro 2 – repeat verse riff 4 times non palm muted

Verse 1 – Palm muted
You tell your useless stories
That you claim are not fiction
You have been in a hover craft
You’re a human contradiction

Small bass solo (just drums and bass)

Chorus
You know you’re such an idiot
Why can’t you get a life?
You can run 30 miles an hour
You have a laser penknife

Verse 2
You are oblivious to the fact
That you are copying my work
Go and get your own brain
And wipe off that smirk

Chorus

Bass solo (just drums and bass)

Middle 8 solo (lots of shredding)

Bridge
Will you bug me through college?

Verse 3
Oh yes I really believe you
You’re full of crap
Don’t worry I’ll smile anyway
I’ll give you a slap

2x Chorus

Bass solo and crash finish on F# power chord


I have also started to write a tab for the song, no solo on it as of yet, there probably won't be anyway because it'll probably change anyway:


railroad blues


Harry Boam.

intro

F#m7-B7-F#m7-B7-E7-Am7-E7-Am7 repeat in blues stle

palm mute A power chord for 2 bars

intro 2- verse riff non palm muted- repeat 4 times

(verse riff)
F# E B A
E||-----------------------|
B||-----------------------|
G||--11111111-9-----------|
D||--11111111-9-999-77777-|
A||---9999999-7-999-77777-|
E||-------------777-55555-|

(chorus riff)

E||-----------------------|
B||-----------------------|
G||-----------------44444-|
D||--7777777-4--222-44444-|
A||--7777777-4--222-22222-|
E||--5555555-2--000-------|

wait for 1 bar as bass only plays then go to next verse

[Harry]

Ok I've recorded my song now*spin* sorry about the poor microphone quality..

http://media.putfile.com/The-Train-Man

I've also handed it in to my teacher, although it was meant to be in last tuesday*cool*

[FATAL]

I like the solo. Congratulations to the guitarist. Especially since it's an amateur work I assume.

[Harry]

Yeah I'm the guitarist :D I did everything on that song lol because I couldn't be bothered getting a bassist round so the bass part is played on my guitar..and it took about 2 hours in cakewalk to make the drum beat.

[lucius octavion]

*bang* AWESOME! :)

[FATAL]

Yeah I'm the guitarist :D
Oooo, I'll have to take my words back then!

Naa, that was really great, mate! Only the singing was a bit screwy sounding.